quittrots life

ok im playing simulation on wolf as quittrot ok but im not done yet.
It is early winter i look around for food and water i find some water and a beaver i kill the beaver and drink some water. My mate wind runs off i look around for her and find her i run to the den. It is night time we sleep i wake up and my pack hunts some caribou. We are unsucsessful we run to the den. Wind runs off again and so does my beta male aries im alone. I look for aries and find him then look for wind and cant find her i look around some more and find her it is night again. We hunt elk and are sucsesful. We eat some then drink some water and run back to the den and sleep.
im not done but thats all i have so far. Ok i got more know i was playing again today.
I walk through the woods i find some food and eat i sleep. then walk through the woods again. I find water and drink it. I walk around the woods mans gun ends my life
the end
whos your fav wolf to play as mine is Surge

D: I wish she didn't have to die like that.

There are no periods in there at ALL. I felt winded just reading it... There isn't much depth, either, but I guess you could call it a story, although it seems like something we all do, every ten minutes.

sorry

No offense, but I agree with Demetri. Now I'm seeing lines and colors from no periods.

i said sorry ok ill edit it gosh

Naw, you don't have to.

i already did

That's better. Sorry if I sounded rude.

Really? I know you edited it, but really? She was just expressing her opinion, and you have to come back with a snooty booty response. I'm not trying to be rude or anything, but, you're being a little rude.

Sorry if I'm veering off of topic, but it just ticked me off a bit..

They asked me to read it through s PM, so and I didn't want to be mean and ignore them, so I posted. :\

hello everybody
sorry again for the story with no periods and no depth (whatever that is) but in case you didn't know I am ONLY 8 years old so sorry my post was not to your high standards and thanks HappygirlXD and Demetri for defending me I really appreciate that.

EDIT 1-Well, I lost the game WOLF because I had to restore my computer, but my writing is much better, now that I'm older, but I may never post another story here again, unless I'm allowed to re-download it.

EDIT 2-Good news! I just remembered that I burned WOLF to a CD, and if I find the CD I'll have a most likely 8/10 chance of WOLF being restored on my computer! I'll still have to re-download DOSbox, but who cares? Not me! I should be back to writing awesome-sauce-with-sides-of-fries-stories in no time! And playing WOLF for hours on end! Yay me!